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The bar graph shows the total manufacturing production in percentages Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world.

The bar graph shows the total manufacturing production in percentages Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world. 7aNw6
The provided bar graph demonstrate the proportion of total world's wheat production in nations like Asia, Europe and the rest of the world, over a time period of 160 years between 1840 and 2000. Overall Asia and the rest of the world experienced an upward trend, while Europe witnessed a downward trend in the chart. Both the countries and the rest of the world experienced a fluctuation in the given chart. In 1840, Asia and Europe in total produced 90% of wheat, whereas the rest of the world produced only 10%. In Asia, the production of wheat dwindled to 30% in 1880 and 40 years later it again dipped to 20%. On the other hand, in Europe, wheat production was gradually rose to almost 45% in 1880, and again increased by 5% in 1920. A similar trend also observed by the rest of the world. In 1960, while Europe with the rest of the world captured a total of 75% of the world's wheat production, Asia comprised only 25%. Finally, in 2000, Asia again gained the highest position by capturing 40% of the world's wheat production. On the contrary, Europe's wheat production dropped dramatically to about 28%.
The provided bar graph demonstrate the proportion of total world's
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, over a time period of 160 years between 1840 and 2000.
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Asia and the
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of the
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world
experienced an upward trend, while Europe witnessed a downward trend in the chart. Both the countries and the
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rest
of the
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world
experienced a fluctuation in the
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chart. In 1840, Asia and Europe in total produced 90% of
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wheat
, whereas the
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rest
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world
produced
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only
10%. In Asia, the
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of
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dwindled to 30% in 1880 and 40 years later it again dipped to 20%.
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, in Europe,
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wheat
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production
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to almost 45% in 1880, and again increased by 5% in 1920. A similar trend
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rest
of the world.

In 1960, while Europe with the
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rest
of the
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world
captured a total of 75% of the world's
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wheat
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production
, Asia comprised
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only
25%.
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, in 2000, Asia again gained the highest position by capturing 40% of the world's
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.
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dropped
dramatically
to about 28%.
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IELTS academic The bar graph shows the total manufacturing production in percentages Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world.

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