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THE GIVEN CHART SHOWS DIFFERENT KIND OF PRODUCTION IN FRANCE.

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THE PIE CHART REPRESENT THE ENERGY PRODUCTION OF FRANCE WITH FIVE TYPES(COAL, NUCLEAR, PETRO, OTHER AND GAS) IN 1195 AN 2005. OVERALL, THE GAS AND COAL ARE THE MOST PRODUCED FORM OF ENERGY WHICH, TOGETHER COVERS MORE THAN HALF OF TOTAL MANUFACTURE WHILE, NUCLEAR AND OTHER ARE THE LEAST CONSTRUCTED SOURCE OF ENERGY. PETRO IS ONLY SHOW NEGATIVE IMPACT IN PRODUCING. ENERGY PRODUCED BY COAL ACCOUNTED FOR 29. 80% IN FIRST YEAR AND SHOWED A SLIGHT INCREASE WITH 30. 93% IN 2005. SIMILARLY, GAS IS ACCOUNTED FOR 29. 63% IN 1995 WHICH, ROSE MARGINALLY TO 31. 10 IN 10YEARS. AS REGARDS TO NUCLEAR AND OTHER SOURCE OF ENERGY SHOW SIMILAR INCLINED OF 5% FROM 1995 TO 2005 WITH 10. 10%AND 9. 10 % RESPECTIVELY. PETRO IS ONE WHICH DECREASES FROM 29. 10% TO 19. 10% IN 2005.
THE PIE CHART REPRESENT THE
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ENERGY
PRODUCTION OF FRANCE WITH FIVE TYPES(COAL, NUCLEAR,
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PETRO
, OTHER AND GAS) IN 1195 AN 2005.

OVERALL
, THE GAS AND COAL ARE THE MOST PRODUCED FORM OF
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ENERGY
WHICH, TOGETHER COVERS MORE THAN HALF OF TOTAL MANUFACTURE WHILE, NUCLEAR AND OTHER ARE THE LEAST CONSTRUCTED SOURCE OF
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PETRO
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NEGATIVE
IMPACT IN PRODUCING.

ENERGY PRODUCED BY COAL ACCOUNTED FOR 29. 80% IN
FIRST
YEAR AND
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SHOWED
A SLIGHT INCREASE WITH 30. 93% IN 2005.
SIMILARLY
, GAS
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 29. 63% IN 1995 WHICH, ROSE
MARGINALLY
TO 31. 10 IN 10YEARS.

AS REGARDS TO NUCLEAR AND OTHER SOURCE OF
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ENERGY
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SIMILAR INCLINED OF 5% FROM 1995 TO 2005 WITH 10. 10%AND 9. 10 %
RESPECTIVELY
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PETRO
IS ONE WHICH DECREASES FROM 29. 10% TO 19. 10% IN 2005.
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