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THE GIVEN CHART SHOWS THE GROSS DOMESTIC PRODUCT FROM TWO SECTORS IN UK FROM 1992 TO2000.

THE GIVEN CHART SHOWS THE GROSS DOMESTIC PRODUCT FROM TWO SECTORS IN UK FROM 1992 TO2000. 8LkYr
THE BAR CHART REPRESENTS THE TWO SECTOR( IT INDUSTY AND SERVICE INDUSTRY) PARTICIPATING IN GROSS DOMESTIC PRODUCT. IN THE PERIOD OF 8 YEARS FROM 1992 TO 2000. UNITS ARE MEASURED IN PERCENTAGE. OVERALL, IT INDUSTRY IS DOMINATING IN GIVEN PERIOD OF TIME. BOTH IT INDUSTRY AND SERVICE INDUSTRY ARE LOWEST IN FIRST YEAR. IN 2000 BOTH SECTORS ARE AT PEAK. IN 1992, IT INDUSTRY IS ACCOUNTED FOR MORE THAN 6% WHEREAS, SERVICE INDUSTRY IS AT 4%. THERE IS DIFFERENCE OF 2% WITHIN IT INDUSTRY AND SERVICE INDUSTRY WITH 6% AND 8% RESPECTIVELY. IT INDUSTRY AND SERVICE INDUSTRY SHOW SIMILARLY PARTICIPATING IN 1996 AS REGARDS TO 1998, IT INDUSTRY IS STATED AS 12% WHILE, SERVICES SECTOR STOOD AT LESS THAN 8%. IT INDUSTRY IS AROUND TWICE IN PERCENTAGE AS COMPARED TO SERVICE INDUSTRY WITH 8% AND 16% REPECTIVELY.
THE BAR CHART REPRESENTS THE TWO SECTOR
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IT
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INDUSTY
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SERVICE
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INDUSTRY)
PARTICIPATING IN GROSS DOMESTIC PRODUCT. IN THE PERIOD OF 8 YEARS FROM 1992 TO 2000. UNITS
ARE MEASURED
IN PERCENTAGE.

OVERALL
, IT
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INDUSTRY
IS DOMINATING IN
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GIVEN
PERIOD OF TIME. BOTH IT
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INDUSTRY
AND
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SERVICE
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INDUSTRY
ARE LOWEST IN
FIRST
YEAR. IN 2000 BOTH SECTORS ARE AT PEAK.

IN 1992, IT
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INDUSTRY
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR MORE THAN 6% WHEREAS,
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SERVICE
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INDUSTRY
IS AT 4%. THERE IS DIFFERENCE OF 2% WITHIN IT
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INDUSTRY
AND
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SERVICE
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INDUSTRY
WITH 6% AND 8%
RESPECTIVELY
. IT
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INDUSTRY
AND
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SERVICE
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INDUSTRY
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SHOW
SIMILARLY
PARTICIPATING IN 1996 AS REGARDS TO 1998, IT
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INDUSTRY
IS STATED
AS 12% WHILE,
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SERVICES
SECTOR STOOD AT LESS THAN 8%. IT
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INDUSTRY
IS AROUND TWICE IN PERCENTAGE AS COMPARED TO
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SERVICE
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INDUSTRY
WITH 8% AND 16%
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REPECTIVELY
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IELTS academic THE GIVEN CHART SHOWS THE GROSS DOMESTIC PRODUCT FROM TWO SECTORS IN UK FROM 1992 TO2000.

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