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design of wave-energy machine and its location options with installation costs.

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The given diagrams illustrate the design of wave-energy machine and its location options with installation costs. Overall, wave-energy with the help of two chambers and generator produces into electrical power whereas this complete setup that can fix in are several locations based on the installation costs whereas at lower depth with low cost as well deeper depths with high installation costs. The waves moves in to the direction of water inlet then that lower level chamber air enters into the next level chambers prior to out the air from second chamber. With the help of air flow from top side of unit turbine fans rotates eventhogh excess air pressure will go out. Hereafter the number of roations reaches the rotations per mintue by minium requiremnet then the generator generates the power. Firstly small vawes starts low depths thereafter it travells to next level of deeper depths where the installations costs varations takes place.
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diagrams illustrate the design of wave-energy machine and its location options with installation costs.

Overall
, wave-energy with the
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help
of two
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chambers
and generator produces into electrical power whereas this complete setup that can
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fix
in are several locations based on the installation costs whereas at lower
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depth
with low cost
as well
deeper
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depths
with high installation costs.

The waves
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moves
in to the direction of water inlet then that lower level
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chamber
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air
enters into the
next
level
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chambers
prior to out the
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air
from second
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chamber
. With the
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help
of
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air
flow from top side of unit turbine fans rotates
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eventhogh
excess
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air
pressure will go out.

Hereafter the number of
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roations
reaches the rotations per
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mintue
by
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minium
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requiremnet
then the generator generates the power.
Firstly
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small
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vawes
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low
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thereafter it
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travells
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level of deeper
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depths
where the installations
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costs
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varations
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IELTS academic design of wave-energy machine and its location options with installation costs.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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