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The given chart reflects a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.

The given chart reflects a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. dkoqE
The given chart reflects a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. In 1990, it is easy to find that a path was in the center of the museum after coming into the door. A big car park was located to the east of the path with two gardens to its north and south respectively. To the west of the path was located a shop with a cottage to its south. Besides, there was an exhibition near to the shop, which with two entrances. And a store was between the exhibition and the north garden. In 2010, the garden which located to the south of the car park was replaced by a new car park. In addition, it’s noticeable that the size of store and shop has been extended. In contrast, the size of the exhibition has been reduced because of the enlarged shop. Moreover, the caffee was transformed to the cottage but without the size change. Overall, although the museum has changed dramatically from 1990 to 2010, the north garden and the big car park have not changed at all.
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chart reflects a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.

In 1990, it is easy to find that a path was in the center of the museum after coming into the door. A
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big
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car
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park
was located
to the east of the path with two gardens to its north and south
respectively
. To the west of the path
was located
a
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shop
with a cottage to its south.
Besides
, there was an exhibition near to the
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shop
, which with two entrances. And a store was between the exhibition and the north garden.

In 2010, the garden which located to the south of the
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car
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park
was replaced
by a new
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car
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park
.
In addition
, it’s noticeable that the size of store and
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shop
has
been extended
.
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In
contrast, the size of the exhibition has been
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reduced
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because
of the enlarged
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shop
.
Moreover
, the
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caffee
was transformed
to the cottage
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without the size
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change
.

Overall
, although the museum has
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changed
dramatically
from 1990 to 2010, the north garden and the
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big
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car
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have not
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changed
at all.
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IELTS academic The given chart reflects a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.

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182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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