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The pie graph offers statistics reflecting how much water did the people in one particular country use during the period from 1988 to 2008.

The pie graph offers statistics reflecting how much water did the people in one particular country use during the period from 1988 to 2008. KGwW1
The pie graph offers statistics reflecting how much water did the people in one particular country use during the period from 1988 to 2008. It is clear that the consumption of water used to wash clothes is the most, which took up 25% in 1988 and then slightly decreased to 22% in 2008. The same trend was witnessed for toilet, falling from 18% to 14%. Likewise, the water consumption of garden also declined, but there was a dramatic dropping from 20% to 7% between 1988 and 2008, becoming the one that consumed the least amount of water. The rest of two categories exposed completely opposite tendency in the same period. A smooth growth from 22% to 28% was seen for the water consumption of bathroom. The percentage of kitchen, in addition, experienced the most obvious increase during the period, rising from 15% to 29%, eventually moving from the least to the most. To sum up, the original proportion of these five categories was approximately equal, while they all changed a lot in the end, especially the kitchen and bathroom accounting for a larger percentage.
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there was a dramatic dropping from 20% to 7% between 1988 and 2008, becoming the one that consumed the least amount of water.

The rest of two categories exposed completely opposite tendency in the same period. A smooth growth from 22% to 28% was
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consumption of bathroom. The percentage of kitchen,
in addition
, experienced the most obvious increase during the period, rising from 15% to 29%,
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moving from the least to the most.

To sum up, the original proportion of these five categories was approximately equal, while they all
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