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The given chart shows data about meat consumtion in european countries

The given chart shows data about meat consumtion in european countries Q2LRx
The given graph illustrates the information regarding meat eaten per person per week in grams in a European country between time period of 1979 to 2004. Overall, it can be summarized that chicken was the most popular meat among the people of the European country followed by beef, lamb and fish was the least preferred food in the given time span. It is evident from the graph that, in 1979 chicken was consumed approximately 150 grams per person per week which shows continues upward trend throughout the given time period and it reached around 250 grams per person per week by the end of 2004. However, in the case of beef vice versa trend was seen as it was taken as a food around 220 grams per person per week in the 1979 and further it dipped up to 170 grams in a week by person till 1982 and it again raised to 240 grams in a week by an individual and then a constant downfall was seen as till the end of 2004 its consumption was just above 100 grams per person per week. Moreover, demand for lamb among the people of the European country was constantly decreased as in a week it was eaten around 150 grams per person and it ended at just 60 grams per person between 1979 to 2004. Fish was the least famous meat among the population as its consumption was almost stagnant throughout the given time period which is in between 50-60 grams per person in a week. Hence, it can be said that preference for meat changed over the years in the European country.
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in
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in a European
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between
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period of 1979 to 2004.

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be summarized
that chicken was the most popular
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meat
among the
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people
of the European
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followed by beef, lamb and fish was the least preferred food in the
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It is evident from the graph that, in 1979 chicken
was consumed
approximately 150
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grams
per
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person
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week
which
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shows
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continues
upward trend throughout the
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period and it reached around 250
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by the
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end
of 2004.
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, in the case of beef vice versa trend was
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a food
around 220
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in the 1979 and
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it dipped up to 170
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by
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till 1982 and it again raised to 240
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in a
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by an individual and then a constant downfall was
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as till the
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end
of 2004 its consumption was
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above 100
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per
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.
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, demand for lamb among the
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people
of the European
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was
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decreased as in a
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it
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around 150
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and it ended at
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60
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. Fish was the least
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among the population as its consumption was almost stagnant throughout the
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period which is in between 50-60
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that preference for
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changed
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