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The given chart provides information about the number of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The given chart provides information about the number of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. R2oVM
The given chart provides information about the number of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Between 2010 and 2015, the total number of visitors increased year after year. Specifically, in 2010, one million visitors visited the island, one-fourth of which stayed on cruise ships and others on the island. The total number experienced a slight growth (approximately 25% of the previous number)) in the following four years, where the 'visitors staying on cruise ships' line escalated mildly but the other line levelled off. The total number of tourists climbed gradually in the next four years reaching virtually 2. 75 million visitors yearly. During this time, the number of visitors staying on cruise ships fluctuated briefly whereas the number of people staying on the island grew sharply shortly and levelled off in the last three years reaching 1. 5 million visitors. From 2015 to 2016, the total number didn't change and it can be perceived from the graph that the visitors were more eager to stay on cruise ships rather than the island. After that, the total number escalated sharply reaching its highest point (3. 5 million visitors) in 2017. Overall, this particular Caribbean island is attracting more tourists each year ( except 2015 and 2016) and two of the most popular types of stay is staying on a cruise ship or the island.
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of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean
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island
between 2010 and 2017.

Between 2010 and 2015, the
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of
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visitors
increased
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year
after
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.
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, in 2010, one
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million
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visitors
visited the
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island
, one-fourth of which stayed on
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cruise
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ships
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and others
on the
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. The
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experienced a slight growth (approximately 25% of the previous number)
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in the following four years, where the 'visitors
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staying
on
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ships' line escalated
mildly
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but
the other line levelled off. The
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of tourists climbed
gradually
in the
next
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virtually
2. 75
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visitors
yearly. During this time, the
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of
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visitors
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on
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cruise
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ships
fluctuated
briefly
whereas the
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of
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people
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staying
on the
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grew
sharply
shortly and levelled off in the last three years reaching 1. 5
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million
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visitors
. From 2015 to 2016, the
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didn't
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change
and it can
be perceived
from the graph that the
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were more eager to stay on
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rather
than the
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island
. After that, the
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escalated
sharply
reaching its highest point (3. 5
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million
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visitors)
in 2017.

Overall
, this particular Caribbean
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island
is attracting more tourists each
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year
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(
except 2015 and 2016) and two of the most popular types of stay is
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staying
on a
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cruise
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ship
or the
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island
.
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IELTS academic The given chart provides information about the number of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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