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Company ABC exports its products mainly to North America and Europe. The following chart shows the sales figures of Company ABC from 2003 to 2008. Write a report (of about 150 words) to the company management describing the information shows in the chart.

Company ABC exports its products mainly to North America and Europe. The following chart shows the sales figures of Company ABC from 2003 to 2008. Write a report (of about 150 words) to the company management describing the information shows in the chart. GlnWx
The chart above illustrates the amount of production that Company ABC exported to North America and Europe from 2003 to 2008. As can be seen, the production sent out to North America was generally increasing, while that in Europe was fluctuate. According to the graph, in 2003, the sale figures in Europe was much higher than that in North America, with nearly 30 and 20 million dollars respectively. After one year, the data rose by approximately 7 million dollars in North America, but just close to 1 million in Europe. Surprisingly, in 2005, the quantity of exported products in both nations was the same (reaching the figure of 40 million dollars). This proved that the ABC company had the tendency to export products to North America more. Until 2006, the amount of production in North America jumped by 10 million dollars, yet that in Europe still unchanged. From 2006 to 2008, there were total differences between the two countries. While the sale figures in North America was slightly growing from 50 to 53 million dollars, the quantity in Europe considerably declined by 20 million (only 20 million dollars left in 2008). In summary, North America might have a better consuming environment than Europe; as a result, the ABC Company exported more and more its products to North America.
The chart above illustrates the amount of production that
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America and Europe from 2003 to 2008. As can be
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, the production
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America was
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.

According to the graph, in 2003, the sale figures in Europe was much higher than that in
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America, with
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million
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respectively
. After one year, the data rose by approximately 7
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million
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in
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close to 1
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in Europe.
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, in 2005, the quantity of exported products in both nations was the same (reaching the figure of 40
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million
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. This proved that the ABC
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had the tendency to export products to
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America more.

Until 2006, the amount of production in
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America jumped by 10
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,
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America was
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, the quantity in Europe
considerably
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(
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In summary,
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America might have a better consuming environment than Europe;
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exported more and more its products to
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IELTS academic Company ABC exports its products mainly to North America and Europe. The following chart shows the sales figures of Company ABC from 2003 to 2008. Write a report (of about 150 words) to the company management describing the information shows in the chart.

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