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The given chart illustrates the information about the number of stanzas who use different kinds of transfer modes train bus and trans in somewhere Town from 2012 to 2015

The given chart illustrates the information about the number of stanzas who use different kinds of transfer modes train bus and trans in somewhere Town from 2012 to 2015 Lrlw1
The giver chart is prepared the information about the passenger of use different kinds of the transfer modes train bus and travels in somewhere Town from 2012 to 2015. Overview it can be clearly seen that the use of the transverse incline throughout the time period other to transport mode showed flucations bus and trains. In 2012 the most favourite mode of transport was train which was used by some where public that was by 20 member of the answer hover in 2013 the interest of public was decreased and it was used by 10% only some some same trend show by bus it was declined 52 to 25% but the percent of crime was increased little bit. In 2014 the bus was most preferable mode of transport in somewhere town that was counted for 70% was that it was declined by tan number of sciences tram was recorded as the second highest prefer transport mode in 2014 and was the most favourite mode for travel it was recorded 19 number of stanzas bus and train was used near about by similar number of passengers 62 and 65 respectively.
The giver chart
is prepared
the information about the passenger of
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use
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different
kinds of the transfer
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modes
train bus and travels in somewhere Town from 2012 to 2015.

Overview it can be
clearly
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seen
that the
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use
of the transverse incline throughout the time period other to
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transport
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mode
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showed
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flucations
bus and trains.

In 2012 the most
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favourite
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mode
of
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transport
was train which was
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used
by
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some where
public that was by 20
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member
of the answer hover in 2013 the interest of public
was decreased
and it was
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used
by 10%
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only
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some
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some
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same
trend
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show
by bus it
was declined
52 to 25%
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but
the percent of crime
was increased
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little bit
.

In 2014 the bus was
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most
preferable
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mode
of
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transport
in somewhere town that
was counted
for 70% was that it
was declined
by tan number of sciences tram
was recorded
as the second highest prefer
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transport
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mode
in 2014 and was the most
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favourite
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mode
for travel it
was recorded
19 number of stanzas bus and train was
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used
near about by similar number of passengers 62 and 65
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The given chart illustrates the information about the number of stanzas who use different kinds of transfer modes train bus and trans in somewhere Town from 2012 to 2015

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