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The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. 56A5P
The two illustrations demonstrate the key phenomenon of workers deciding to work from home and the hours of gender worked at home in 2019. Overall, what stands out from the graph and table is that saving money is the major reason for the male and female to choose work from home where maximum female work under 10 hours per week; on the other hand, most males work 30 hours per week. Saving money is one of the significant reasons both sexes work from home as 45% man and 42% of women select to do it. Another striking cause is more productivity where 24% male and 11% prefer to do their work from home. While there is a noticeable difference in both gender where a minority rate of males choose to stay at home for easier childcare and as compare to female the rate is slightly more than double. In terms of hours, only 3% of males work under 10 hours per week whereas 74% of females work the same hour for a week. 10 to 30 hours of work is done by 16% male and 6% female. A very large proportion of males (81%) work over 30 hours in the week; on the contrary, a tiny fraction of females work similar hours.
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from home and the
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of gender worked at home in 2019.

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to choose
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from home where maximum
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under 10
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;
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, most
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30
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per week.

Saving money is one of the significant reasons both sexes
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from home as 45%
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and 42% of women select to do it. Another striking cause is more productivity where 24% male and 11% prefer to do their
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from home. While there is a noticeable difference in both gender where a minority rate of
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choose to stay at home for easier childcare and as compare to
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the rate is
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more than double.

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under 10
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whereas 74% of
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the same
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for a
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. 10 to 30
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of
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. A
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large proportion of
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(81%)
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over 30
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.

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4 paragraphs
212 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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