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Overall, before starting its life as an adult frog on land every frog undergoes many developmental phases inside the water from egg to tadpole then into an adult.

Overall, before starting its life as an adult frog on land every frog undergoes many developmental phases inside the water from egg to tadpole then into an adult. xmg0y
Overall, before starting its life as an adult frog on land every frog undergoes many developmental phases inside the water from egg to tadpole then into an adult. Firstly life cycle of a frog is started from eggs inside the water then it developed into an embryo. From the embryo a small tadpole came out and it had grown in three stages. After this stage the tadpole increased in size and it developed its front legs. Furtherly, in the next stage of frog's life it started the pulmonary respiration and it is the final stage of its growth inside the water. Secondly the tadpole frog is the stage which is the first phase in land in growth cycle of the frog after this stage it completely transformed into an adult frog
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IELTS academic Overall, before starting its life as an adult frog on land every frog undergoes many developmental phases inside the water from egg to tadpole then into an adult.

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130 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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