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The diagram shows the life cycle of a frog.

The diagram shows the life cycle of a frog. 7ar5Y
The diagram describes the different stages in the life cycle of a frog, an amphibian. Overall, the life cycle consists of 8 stages, opening with mating and ending with the development into adult frogs. The cycle begins with mating between male and female adult frogs in the ground level. The female frogs subsequently lay a large number of eggs on the water, each having an embryo inside. In the next step, these frogspawn hatches from the egg and little tadpoles emerge from them which cling to water plants. Gradually these tadpoles grow bigger and start to form various limbs. The following stage is the transformation of the tadpoles into young frogs. Their tails start to become longer than before and the limbs such as gills grow considerably. In the next stage, the tadpoles start to change as their figure becomes larger in size, and their hind legs appear. Next, their front legs emerge and during this stage, pulmonary breathing also commences. Thus, their journey on water ends and ground life begins. Afterward, their tails begin to shorten which disappear in the succeeding stage. Finally, the young frogs turn into adult frogs that are now ready for mating again.
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stages
in the life cycle of a
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frog
, an amphibian.
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, the life cycle consists of 8
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stages
, opening with mating and ending with the development into adult
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frogs
. The cycle
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begins
with mating between male and female adult
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frogs
in the ground level. The female
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frogs
subsequently
lay
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a large number of
eggs on the water, each having an embryo inside. In the
next
step, these frogspawn hatches from the egg and
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little
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tadpoles
emerge from them which cling to water plants.
Gradually
these
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tadpoles
grow bigger and
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start
to form various limbs.

The following
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stage
is the transformation of the
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tadpoles
into young
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frogs
. Their tails
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start
to become longer than
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before
and the limbs such as gills grow
considerably
. In the
next
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stage
, the
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tadpoles
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start
to
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change
as their figure becomes
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larger in size
, and their hind legs appear.
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, their front legs emerge and during this
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stage
, pulmonary breathing
also
commences.
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, their journey on water ends and ground life
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begins
. Afterward, their tails
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to shorten which disappear in the succeeding
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stage
.
Finally
, the young
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frogs
turn into adult
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that are
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ready for mating again.
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