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The bar chart demonstrates money giving to charity according to age group is calculated in terms of percentage, for the years 1990 and 2010.

The bar chart demonstrates money giving to charity according to age group is calculated in terms of percentage, for the years 1990 and 2010. Wkmq
The bar chart demonstrates money giving to charity according to age group is calculated in terms of percentage, for the years 1990 and 2010. From the graph, it can be noticed that there is a gradual rise and gradual decline in the percentages of charity in the year 1990, and the year 2010 also follows the same trend as 1990. The graph contains age group from 18 to above 65 on horizontal line, and the percentages from 0 to 45 on vertical line. Age groups 18-25 is at lowest position in donating money to charity in both the years with 17 percent in 1990 and 6 percent in 2010. 36 to 50 is the age group which is at top in giving charity with approximately 43 percent in 1990, and in 2010 age group 51 to 65 is at top in giving charity with just below 4 percent. Overall, 1990 is the year in which most of the people donated money to charity apart from ages 51 to 65 and above.
The bar chart demonstrates money giving to
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is calculated
in terms of percentage, for the years 1990 and 2010.

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be noticed
that there is a gradual rise and gradual decline in the percentages of
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charity
in the
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year
1990, and the
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2010
also
follows the same trend as 1990.

The graph contains
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age
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group
from 18 to above 65 on horizontal line, and the percentages from 0 to 45 on vertical line.
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Age
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groups
18-25 is at lowest position in donating money to
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charity
in both the years with 17
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percent
in 1990 and 6
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percent
in 2010. 36 to 50 is the
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age
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which is at top in giving
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charity
with approximately 43
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percent
in 1990, and in 2010
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age
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group
51 to 65 is at top in giving
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charity
with
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below 4
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.
Overall
, 1990 is the
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year
in which most of the
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donated money to
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apart from
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51 to 65 and above.

IELTS academic The bar chart demonstrates money giving to charity according to age group is calculated in terms of percentage, for the years 1990 and 2010.

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