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The given chart describes how olive oil is produced with the use of many types of equipment.

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The given chart describes how olive oil is produced with the use of many types of equipment. Overall, it can be seen that there are seven stages of the production process, from harvesting ride olives from trees by the farmers until they are ready for consumption. To begin with, mature olives are collected and transferred to the rinsing machine where they can be washed with cold water. Then, the olives are continually transported into another machine which grinds olives into pieces and removes the stones to received pure olive paste. At the following stage, they are packed in the bag with holes before being pressed at the next step. After this process is finished, they are put in a water-separating system. This step involves removing water from olives to get the best olive oil. Once this has been completed, olive oil is stored and sold to the customers.
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describes
how olive oil
is produced
with the
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use
of
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many
types of equipment.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that there are seven stages of the production process, from harvesting ride
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olives
from trees by the farmers until they are ready for consumption.

To
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begin
with, mature
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olives
are collected
and transferred to the rinsing machine where they can
be washed
with
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cold
water. Then, the
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olives
are
continually
transported into another machine which grinds
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olives
into pieces and removes the stones to received pure olive paste.

At the following stage, they
are packed
in the bag with holes
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before
being pressed
at the
next
step. After this process
is finished
, they
are put
in a water-separating system. This step involves removing water from
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olives
to
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get
the best olive oil. Once this has
been completed
, olive oil
is stored
and sold to the customers.

IELTS academic The given chart describes how olive oil is produced with the use of many types of equipment.

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148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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