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Complete the description of the table using on appropriate word, words or number. BM6k6
The tabular data illustrates the number of man and women why they are shopping at ASDA supermarket for different purposes. Overall, it can be observed that major reason is that supermarket are close to him home and women’s shop their because of good reputation compared to other motives. According to data regarding, majority of men shopping at ASDA supermarket because it is very close to home, which is a quarter of men, compared to a fifth of women. Therefore, the parking facilities are good for men and also good reputation that are the most cause for men which is nearly a fifth and 17 of males. However, a tiny number of males ignores at supermarket basis of 24 hour shopping an friendly staff. On the other hand, women wants to shop at ASDA supermarket for the cause of parking facilities are good and as well competitive prices around a fifth pf women. Apart from this, around a 6 of women likes their friendly staff. While, they have not like for 24 hours shopping at mall.
The tabular data illustrates the number of
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man
and
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women
why they are
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at
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ASDA
supermarket for
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different
purposes.

Overall
, it can
be observed
that major reason is that supermarket are close to him home and
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women’s
shop their
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because
of
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good
reputation compared to other motives.

According to data regarding,
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majority of
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men
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shopping
at
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ASDA
supermarket
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because
it is
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very
close to home, which is a quarter of
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men
, compared to a fifth of
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women
.
Therefore
, the parking facilities are
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good
for
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men
and
also
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good
reputation that are the most cause for
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men
which is
nearly
a fifth and 17 of males.
However
, a tiny number of males
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ignores
at supermarket basis of 24
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hour
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shopping
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an
friendly staff.

On the other hand
,
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women
wants to shop at
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ASDA
supermarket for the cause of parking facilities are
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good
and
as well
competitive prices around a fifth pf
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women
. Apart from this, around a 6 of
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women
likes their friendly staff. While, they have not like for 24 hours
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shopping
at mall.
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