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The given bar graphs compare the percentage of British pupils at one university in England who could speak other different languages besides English, from 2000 to 2010.

The given bar graphs compare the percentage of British pupils at one university in England who could speak other different languages besides English, from 2000 to 2010. gAP3O
The given bar graphs compare the percentage of British pupils at one university in England who could speak other different languages besides English, from 2000 to 2010. Overall, it is clear that Spanish was the most common language among British students, whereas this was not for other languages except for English over a period of 10 years. According to the graphs, in 2000, Spanish language stood at 30%. Within 10 years, its proportion increased slightly and reached 35% at the end of the timeframe. Moreover, the proportion of two other language speakers rose only by 5%. In addition, the increase in another language speakers was the same with both Spanish and French ones, with 5%. On the other hand, the students who speak only German remained stable, with 10%. Furthermore, the pupils who were able to speak French showed a downward trend, and it went down to 10%. However, the percentage of students who were not able to speak other languages instead of English decreased sharply to 10% in this timeline.
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bar graphs compare the percentage of British pupils at one university in England
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could
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speak
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other
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different
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languages
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English, from 2000 to 2010.

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, it is
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clear
that Spanish was the most common
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language
among British students, whereas this was not for
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other
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languages
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except for
English over a period of 10 years.

According to the graphs, in 2000, Spanish
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language
stood at 30%. Within 10 years, its proportion increased
slightly
and reached 35% at the
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end
of the timeframe.
Moreover
, the proportion of two
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other
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language
speakers rose
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only
by 5%.
In addition
, the increase in another
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speakers was the same with both Spanish and French ones, with 5%.

On the
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hand, the students
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who
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speak
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only
German remained stable, with 10%.
Furthermore
, the pupils
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who
were able to
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speak
French
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showed
a downward trend, and it went down to 10%.
However
, the percentage of students
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were not able to
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speak
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other
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languages
instead
of English decreased
sharply
to 10% in this timeline.
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IELTS academic The given bar graphs compare the percentage of British pupils at one university in England who could speak other different languages besides English, from 2000 to 2010.

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