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The given bar graph shows the percentage of students proficient in a foreign language .summarie the given information below

The given bar graph shows the percentage of students proficient in a foreign language. summarie the given information below 5LDye
The given bar graph compare the proportion of students proficiency a second language in six countries Overal, it is apparent that India is the largest proficient in foreign language in case of both genders. in other case Chinese proportions in male gender is low then females proportion. In the next step, in the Thiland proportion male percentage is more than females following this male percentage is 30% and female percentage is 27%. Subsequently in Romania proportion of male gender is 42% and female proficiency is 64% in contrast famale proficiency is more then male in the second language. At the other hand in Russian and Vietnam proportion of male proficiency is low then then female in both countries. Male proficiency in foreign language in Russia is 35% in contrast Vietnam proficiency is 37%. After that female proficiency in the second language in russia is 42% but in contrast both countries Vietnam female proficiency foreign language is the highest proficiency then both is 56%.
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a second
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in six countries
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language
in case of both genders.
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females
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Thiland
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male percentage is more than
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females
following this male percentage is 30% and
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female
percentage is 27%.
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Subsequently
in Romania
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proportion
of male gender is 42% and
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female
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proficiency
is 64%
in contrast
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famale
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is more
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male in the second
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language
. At the other hand in Russian and Vietnam
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proportion
of male
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proficiency
is low
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then then
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female
in both countries. Male
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in foreign
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in Russia is 35%
in contrast
Vietnam
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proficiency
is 37%. After that
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female
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in the second
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in
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russia
is 42%
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both countries Vietnam
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female
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proficiency
foreign
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language
is the highest
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proficiency
then both is 56%.

IELTS academic The given bar graph shows the percentage of students proficient in a foreign language. summarie the given information below

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