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The line graph show the percentage of renewable energy in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013

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The given line graph illustrates the quantity of energy produced in 6 Asian and Europe countries between 2010 and 2013 From an overall perspective, it can be observed that the statistics for all countries increased except for India. In addition, the amount of sustainable energy produced in Germany increased quickly, surpassing other countries in 2011. Looking for further details, it can be seen that the figure for Germany increased significantly from nearly 17% in 2010 to 25% in 2013. Concurrently, the data for France and Spain experienced similar trends, with a climbed from 13% to 15% and from 14% to just over 15% respectively. Meanwhile, China witnessed a slight decreased from just under 20% in 2010 to nearly 17 in 2011, and a final rise to 21% by the end of the time frame. Subsequently, a reverse pattern can be observed in the figure for the USA, the amount of energy generated in 2010 was roughly 10%, followed by a dramatic increase to 13% in the next year, after that it remained steady throughout the surveyed period

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 line graph illustrates the quantity of energy produced in 6 Asian and Europe countries between 2010 and 2013

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 India. In addition
, the amount of sustainable energy produced in Germany increased quickly
, surpassing other countries in 2011.

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, the data for France and Spain experienced similar trends, with a climbed from 13% to 15% and from 14% to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 over 15% respectively
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 under 20% in 2010 to nearly
 17 in 2011, and a final rise to 21% by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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 of the time frame. Subsequently
, a reverse pattern can be observed
 in the figure for the USA, the amount of energy generated in 2010 was roughly 10%, followed by a dramatic increase to 13% in the next
 year, after that it remained steady throughout the surveyed period