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The given bar graph shows the estimated continent-wise increase in food production (in million MT) needed to feed the world population in 2045.

The given bar graph shows the estimated continent-wise increase in food production (in million MT) needed to feed the world population in 2045. p5oE0
The bar graph depicts estimated growth in food production in Africa, Asia, North America, South America and Europe that will be need of world to feed the world population in 2045 and the data calibrated in million MT. Overall, it can be seen that Africa will be the largest food producer in the world, whereas Europe projected at the last position in the list among given countries in the given period. At first glance, In 2045, it is estimated that Africa will leads with 400 million food production to feed the world population among all the five given countries. The calculated food agriculture in North America will be half of the Asia with just 25 million MT over the year 2045. With regards to Europe, it is forecasted that Europe countributes almost zero food production to the world in 2045. Asia and South America projected to be at half-double situation with 50 and 100 million MT respectively in 2045.
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production in Africa, Asia, North America, South America and Europe that will
be need
of
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world
to feed the
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population in 2045 and the data calibrated in
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million
MT.

Overall
, it can be
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that Africa will be the largest
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food
producer in the
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world
, whereas Europe projected at the last position in the list among
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given
countries in the
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given
period.

At
first
glance, In 2045, it
is estimated
that Africa will
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leads
with 400
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million
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food
production to feed the
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world
population among all the five
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given
countries. The calculated
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agriculture in North America will be half of the Asia with
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just
25
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million
MT over the year 2045.

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With regards to
Europe, it
is forecasted
that Europe
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countributes
almost zero
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food
production to the
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world
in 2045. Asia and South America projected to be at half-double situation with 50 and 100
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million
MT
respectively
in 2045.
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IELTS academic The given bar graph shows the estimated continent-wise increase in food production (in million MT) needed to feed the world population in 2045.

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