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The supplied graph and bar chart compare the regular rainfall and temperature per month in a region of East Africa.

The supplied graph and bar chart compare the regular rainfall and temperature per month in a region of East Africa. nRgnP
The supplied graph and bar chart compare the regular rainfall and temperature per month in a region of East Africa. Overall, the given grap and chart show the similar pattern with fluctuation throughout 12-month period. It can be seen that March responsible for the hottest month over the year while the time that rains the most is April. Looking at the line graph, the temperature reach the first peak with 24 degree in March before increase slightly by 2 degree over two first month. After that, it fall sharply until July, accounting for only 20. 5 degree at that time. Before blummeting again to under 21. 5 degree in the last month, the temperature in this area rise significantly then make up 23. 5 degree in October. Regarding the bar chart, the highest millimeters of rainfall over 1 months is April with around 260mm, followed by 160mm in November. Additionally, amount of rain in October and some months in the summer namely March and May range from 100 to 150mm whereas other month's rain distribution are not over 50mm. Not to mention that there is more rainfall in the first six months of the year than months after July.
The supplied graph and bar chart compare the regular rainfall and temperature per
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month
in a region of East Africa.

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the similar pattern with fluctuation throughout
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12-month
period. It can be
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seen
that March responsible for the hottest
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month
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the year while the time that rains the most is April.

Looking at the line graph, the temperature reach the
first
peak with 24
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degree
in March
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before
increase
slightly
by 2
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degree
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over
two
first
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month
. After that, it
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fall
sharply
until July, accounting for
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only
20. 5
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degree
at that time.
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blummeting
again to under 21. 5
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degree
in the last
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month
, the temperature in this area rise
significantly
then
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make
up 23. 5
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degree
in October.

Regarding the bar chart, the highest millimeters of rainfall
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over
1
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months
is April with around
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260mm
, followed by
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160mm
in November.
Additionally
, amount of rain in October and
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months
in the summer
namely
March and May range from 100 to
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150mm
whereas other month's rain distribution are not
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over
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50mm
. Not to mention that there is more rainfall in the
first
six
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of the year than
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months
after July.
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IELTS academic The supplied graph and bar chart compare the regular rainfall and temperature per month in a region of East Africa.

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