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The chart below shows the employment rates of the 25 to 34-year and 55 to 64-year-old population according to the highest level of education attained in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compares the modifications of annual expenditure of school in the years 1981, 1991 and 2001 in United Kingdom. Overall, In all the year teacher salaries accounted for the major part of the annual expenses in contrast to insurance which is least. Total school spending on Other workers salaries realatively decreased as years passed. Resources and furniture expereinec flucations in the money spent in different years. From the year 1981 to the next two decades largest amount was spent on teachers nearly 40%, 50% and 45% in the year 1981, 1991 and 2001 respectively. Eventhough money alloted for insurance increased Noticeably yet it doesnt accounted much. However salaries of other workers decreased frrom 28 %to 22% and reached 15% by the year 2001. Amount for Resources for examples books increased from the year 1981 to 1991 by 5%, later it reduced to 9% while Furtniture and equipment initially dropped from 15% to 5% within a decade, it showed a surge reaching 23% in the year 2001.
The pie charts compares the modifications of annual expenditure of school in the years 1981, 1991 and 2001
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, In all the
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teacher salaries accounted for the major part of the annual expenses
in contrast
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realatively
decreased as years passed. Resources and furniture
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expereinec
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flucations
in the money spent in
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From the
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1981 to the
next
two decades
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largest
amount
was spent
on teachers
nearly
40%, 50% and 45% in the
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1981, 1991 and 2001
respectively
.
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Eventhough
money
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alloted
for insurance increased
Noticeably
yet
it
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doesnt
accounted much.
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However
salaries of other workers decreased
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frrom
28
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%to
22% and reached 15% by the
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year
2001.

Amount for Resources for examples books increased from the
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year
1981 to 1991 by 5%, later it
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reduced
to 9% while
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Furtniture
and equipment
initially
dropped from 15% to 5% within a decade, it
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showed
a surge reaching 23% in the
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2001.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the employment rates of the 25 to 34-year and 55 to 64-year-old population according to the highest level of education attained in two separate years.

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