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The given bar graph illustrates information regarding the percentage of generation in four different nations from 1950 and 2002 2050

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The given bar graph elucidates the information regarding the proportion of a generation in four different nations between 1950 and 2009 has been given of 2050. Ural it is received that maximum generation rate was witnessed in China as compared with India China and USA. At a fleeting glance it is immensely clear that initiating at 15% in India during 1950 the percentage of masses in 2002 nearly 19% and it is predicted that the population will Rose to just above per 20% after five decades more hour the proportion of individual in China was near about 25% and 23% in 1950 and 2000 respectively whereas in population is expected to be just 17% till 2050. Moving for the proportion of persons in the USA stood at 10% during 1950 and going by the estimation that population rate will be remain same in 2050 none the less the minimal difference was observed in the percentage of population of Japan in year 1990 and 2000 was negligible.
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that initiating at 15% in India during 1950 the percentage of masses in 2002
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above per 20% after five decades more hour the proportion of individual in China was near about 25% and 23% in 1950 and 2000
respectively
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17% till 2050. Moving for the proportion of persons in the USA stood at 10% during 1950 and going by the estimation that
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population
rate will be
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none the less
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of Japan in year 1990 and 2000 was negligible.
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IELTS academic The given bar graph illustrates information regarding the percentage of generation in four different nations from 1950 and 2002 2050

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