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The map illustrates the ground floor of an art gallery have developed from 2015 to the present day. Overall, it is clear that this floor has improved significantly with the emergence of new facilities. The first and major change is that from 2015 to the present day, the entrance is relocated further to the right to make room for a ramp for wheelchair, making it accessible for disabled people to go in the art gallery. Entering the art gallery, it is obvious that the reception desk has been moved a bit to the left and changed into a round desk, forming a circle in the middle of the entrance hall. Furthermore, to the north of the reception table, a lift was built next to the stair next to upper floor. Looking at the west of the reception table, there are a number of changes. For instance, the exhibition room 4 were destroyed, followed by the construction of Children’s AREA in the initial place. Moreover, the gallery room was converted into the temporary exhibitions and moved slightly to the south. Meanwhile, the coffee and art shop became the new gallery room, following with the appearance of coffee machines in front of the new gallery room. Regarding the changes to the west of the reception table, the east side remained the same.
The map illustrates the
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ground floor
of an
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art
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gallery
have developed from 2015 to the present day.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that this floor has
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improved
significantly
with the emergence of new facilities.

The
first
and major
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change
is that from 2015 to the present day, the entrance
is relocated
further
to the right to
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make
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room
for a ramp for wheelchair, making it accessible for disabled
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people
to go in the
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art
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gallery
. Entering the
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art
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gallery
, it is obvious that the
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reception
desk has been
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moved
a bit to the
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left
and
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changed
into a round desk, forming a circle in the middle of the entrance hall.
Furthermore
, to the north of the
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reception
table, a lift
was built
next
to the stair
next
to upper floor.

Looking at the west of the
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reception
table, there are a number of
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changes
.
For instance
, the exhibition
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room
4 were
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destroyed
, followed by the construction of Children’s AREA in the initial place.
Moreover
, the
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gallery
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room
was converted
into the temporary exhibitions and
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moved
slightly
to the south. Meanwhile, the coffee and
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art
shop became the new
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gallery
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room
, following with the appearance of coffee machines in front of the new
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gallery
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room
. Regarding the
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changes
to the west of the
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reception
table, the east side remained the same.
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IELTS academic helee elejelgjkhek buhr youa

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4 paragraphs
220 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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