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The given bar graph illustrate the information about households choose by consumer from 1996 to 2006 in united kingdom. The data has calibrated in percentage. To Begin with, in 1999 and 2006, the telephone was selected by individuals recorded as 90%. More than 60% microwave selected by consumer in 1996 and nearly 80% in 2006. The fridge was preferred by consumer of households in 1996 and 2006 as 65% and 68%, respectively. Moreover, mobile phone was chosed by by people in 1996 exactly 20%. 50% mobile phone had used by households people in 2006. Approximately, 60% of Internet connection was utilised by masses in 2006. Only 10% of Internet connect was chosed by people in 1996. Overall maximum telephone was utilized by people in both years as compare to other things. Mobile phone was less selected by people in each year

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given
 bar graph illustrate the information about households choose by consumer from 1996 to 2006 in The proper noun "United Kingdom" needs to be capitalized.United Kingdom
united kingdom
. The data has calibrated in percentage. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
Begin
 with, in 1999 and 2006, the telephone was selected
 by individuals recorded as 90%. More than 60% microwave selected by consumer in 1996 and nearly
 80% in 2006. The fridge was preferred
 by consumer of households in 1996 and 2006 as 65% and 68%, respectively
. Moreover
, mobile phone was Possible spelling mistake found.closedchosechosenchasedchokedhosed
chosed
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by by
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people
 in 1996 exactly 20%. 50% mobile phone had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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people
 in 2006. Approximately, 60% of Internet connection was Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.utilized
utilised
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 10% of Internet connect was Possible spelling mistake found.closedchosechosenchasedchokedhosed
chosed
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people
 in 1996. Overall
 maximum telephone was Do not mix variants of the same word ('utilize' and 'utilise') within a single text.utilised
utilized
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people
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