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Procedure for University entry for high school students

Procedure for University entry for high school students PMgkJ
the flowchart elucidates how high school students after the completion of it get enrolled in university. overall it is clear that 12 different steps to follow to get addmission in the university intialy starting with obtaning highschool degree to the eventual entry in the university. it is clearly observed from the chart that. In very first step to get high school degree, students have to download application form form university website and they have to complete the application form. after filling all the necessary details candidates have to submit or send that application form to the admin. so after sending that form applicant can recive reply from admin within 2 weeks and reply includes the rejection, acceptence or in last provision acceptence. if contender who get rejected they can also apply for another course or they can cancel their application. provisional acceptence means that students have to send more documents to admin. and at last if student get acceptence they can select subject and do register their self to dean. in the last step student can get entry in university.
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the
flowchart elucidates how high school
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students
after the completion of it
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get
enrolled in university.

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overall
it is
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clear
that 12
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different
steps to follow to
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get
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addmission
in the university
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intialy
starting with
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obtaning
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highschool
degree to the eventual entry in the university.

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it
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clearly
observed from the chart that. In
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very
first
step to
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get
high school degree,
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students
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have to
download
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application
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form
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form
university
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website and
they
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have to
complete the
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application
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form
.
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after
filling all the necessary
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details
candidates
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have to
submit or
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send
that
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application
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form
to the admin.
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so
after sending that
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form
applicant can
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recive
reply from admin within 2 weeks and reply includes the rejection,
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acceptence
or in last provision
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acceptence
.
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if
contender who
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get
rejected they can
also
apply for another
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course or
they can cancel their
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application
.
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provisional
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acceptence
means that
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students
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have to
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send
more documents to admin.
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and
at last if
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student
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get
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acceptence
they can select subject and do register their self to dean.
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in
the last step
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student
can
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get
entry in university.

IELTS academic Procedure for University entry for high school students

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
180 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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