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The given line charts illustrates the data about distinct types of fish (Atlantic cod,haddack,yellow fin tuna ,swardfish ) in the world from 1982to 2007. The units are measured in numbers

The given line charts illustrates the data about distinct types of fish (Atlantic cod, haddack, yellow fin tuna, swardfish ) in the world from 1982to 2007. The units are measured in numbers 7aapb
The given line chart illustrates tha data about the individuals who used the internet in three distinct territory ( USA, Canada, Mexico) between 1999and 2009 the units are measured in percentage. From the overall analysis, the highest perfrence who used the internet in Canada, while the lowest percentage was recorded of that masses who utilized the internet in Mexico. According to the provided presentation, the proportion of people, who liked the internet was 5%in 1999. stagnating at 5% from 1999 yo 2005, the use of internet increase greually to 23% during 2005. From 2005 the preferences of humans rose constebaly till the end of the year which was given in the charts. As can be seen that escalating significantly to 10% in the next year from 5% in 1999 then the interest of mankind increase constantly till 2003. In the 2009 it reached at 70% in Canada in the prefrence of usa internet who used the internet from 5%to 60%between 1999and 2009it had fluctuation through out the years.
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used
the internet in three distinct territory
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USA, Canada, Mexico) between 1999and 2009 the units
are measured
in percentage. From the
overall
analysis, the highest
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perfrence
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who
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used
the internet in Canada, while the lowest percentage
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utilized the internet in Mexico.

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liked the internet was 5%in 1999.
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from 1999 yo 2005
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to 23% during 2005. From 2005 the preferences of humans rose
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of the year which was
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that escalating
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through out
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IELTS academic The given line charts illustrates the data about distinct types of fish (Atlantic cod, haddack, yellow fin tuna, swardfish ) in the world from 1982to 2007. The units are measured in numbers

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