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The given bar chart provides information about waste collected by a recycling center in the period from 2011 to 2015

The given bar chart provides information about waste collected by a recycling center in the period from 2011 to 2015 JVLaB

The given bar chart provides information about waste collected by a recycling center in the period from 2011 to 2015. Overall, the waste of all categories witnessed a trend the same and slight fluctuation. Besides, the amount of wastepaper was the highest while garden waste was the lowest. As can be seen from the chart, in 2011, the amount of waste paper collected by recycling in the center was 57 tons. This figure dropped significantly to 40 tons in 2013 and after recover back to 70 tons at the end of the period. In contrast, the amount of garden waste increased slightly from 32 tons in 2011 to 35 tons in 2015 despite some fluctuation throughout the period. On the other hand, the amount of collected glass and tins shared a similar trend. The number of tins fluctuated around 30 tons in all 5 years, with the highest of 39 tons being in 2015. While the amount of glass held over 40 tons throughout the period. in 2013 it surpassed paper to hold first place with 48 tons.

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