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The bar chart depicts a number of calories which were consumed in seven countries in a 25- year period beginning from 1975.

The bar chart depicts a number of calories which were consumed in seven countries in a 25- year period beginning from 1975. j8dgL
The bar chart depicts a number of calories which were consumed in seven countries in a 25- year period beginning from 1975. It can be clearly seen that there was a significant increase in consumption levels between 1975 and 2000 in all countries. It is obvious that the caloric energy of Brazil reached the peak with 2500, while most of the countries intook around 2000 in 1975. Especially, the calories were intaken in Bangladesh hit the lowest point merely around 2000 over the period. Whereas, China overtook Brazil to be the countrie which had the most calorie consumption with 3000 in 2000. By comparison, the rise was a substantial change in China and Indonesia whose citizens consumed approximately 1000 within 25 years. Furthermore, the increase in calorie intake in Brazil and India stood around at 500 as a half amount of China and Indonesia. The differences in a growth figured clearly the ranking in each nation. On the top of that is the gap between the highest and lowest in terms of consumption was greater in 2000 (about 800 and 300) than it had been in 1975
The bar chart depicts a number of calories which
were consumed
in seven countries in a 25- year period beginning from 1975.

It can be
clearly
seen
that there was a significant increase in consumption levels between 1975 and 2000 in all countries.

It is obvious that the caloric energy of Brazil reached the peak with 2500, while most of the countries
intook
around 2000 in 1975.
Especially
, the calories were
intaken
in Bangladesh hit the lowest point
merely
around 2000 over the period.
Whereas
, China overtook Brazil to be the
countrie
which had the most calorie consumption with 3000 in 2000.

By comparison, the rise was a substantial
change
in China and Indonesia whose citizens consumed approximately 1000 within 25 years.
Furthermore
, the increase in calorie intake in Brazil and India stood around at 500 as a half amount of China and Indonesia. The differences in a growth figured
clearly
the ranking in each nation. On the top of
that is
the gap between the highest and lowest in terms of consumption was greater in 2000 (about 800 and 300) than it had been in 1975
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IELTS academic The bar chart depicts a number of calories which were consumed in seven countries in a 25- year period beginning from 1975.

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