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The given bar chart illustrates the data related to the cost of importing cloth from seven regions in the EU in two years: 2015 and 2016.

The given bar chart illustrates the data related to the cost of importing cloth from seven regions in the EU in two years: 2015 and 2016. DYVQa
The given bar chart illustrates the data related to the cost of importing cloth from seven regions in the EU in two years: 2015 and 2016. Overall, it is apparent that while the figures for price in Tunisia, Turkey and Vietnam increased moderately over the period, the opposite was true for others. Another noticeable feature is that the data of Tunisia was the highest in both years. In detail, Tunisia had the most money spent for importing cloth, at barely 17 euro and exactly 25 euro, in 2015 and 2016, respectively. The figure for Turkey was slightly lower, standing at under 15 euro in the first year and rising to about 17 euro in the next year. Although the data of Vietnam stood at third position at the beginning, there was a significant growth to 20 euro one year later. Regarding the price of cloth imported by other countries, the figures for India and China started at approximately 13 euro before decreasing by around 5 euro after one year. In addition, the datas of Iran and Bangladesh followed the same pattern, declining from 10 euro and 7 euro to 7 euro and 5 euro, respectively.
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bar chart illustrates the
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related to the cost of importing cloth from seven regions in the EU in two years: 2015 and 2016.

Overall
, it is apparent that while the figures for price in Tunisia, Turkey and Vietnam increased
moderately
over the period, the opposite was true for others. Another noticeable feature is that the
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data
of Tunisia was the highest in both years.

In detail, Tunisia had the most money spent for importing cloth, at
barely
17
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euro
and exactly 25
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euro
, in 2015 and 2016,
respectively
. The figure for Turkey was
slightly
lower, standing at under 15
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euro
in the
first
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year
and rising to about 17
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euro
in the
next
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. Although the
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data
of Vietnam stood at third position at the beginning, there was a significant growth to 20
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euro
one
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year
later.

Regarding the price of cloth imported by other countries, the figures for India and China
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started
at approximately 13
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euro
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before
decreasing by around 5
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euro
after one
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.
In addition
, the
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datas
of Iran and Bangladesh followed the same pattern, declining from 10 euro and 7 euro to 7 euro and 5
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euro
,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The given bar chart illustrates the data related to the cost of importing cloth from seven regions in the EU in two years: 2015 and 2016.

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6.0
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