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The given bar chart illustrates how electricity was produced and utilised by ten countries in 2014.The units are measured in billions.

The given bar chart illustrates how electricity was produced and utilised by ten countries in 2014. The units are measured in billions. lekMQ
The given bar chart illustrates how electricity was produced and utilised by ten countries in 2014. The units are measured in billions. As an overall trend, it is evident that, maximum amount of electricity was produced as well as consumed in the country China, whereas minimum production and consumption is seen in korea. Thus, Germany was the only country with higher utilisation value than production value. To commence with, China remained a popular city in producing adequate electricity with 5398 billion kwh and almost equal consumption rate. However, the United States was the second largest country which generated 4094and utilised 3866 billion kwh in 2014. Countries like Russia, Korea, France and Brazil consumed as much electricity as they produced. Adapting further, there was 50. 5 billion kwh electricity consumption observed in Germany but only 526. 6 billion kwh was produced in the given period. Interestingly, India was the only country which had the massive difference between the production and consumption rate with 871 and 678. 8 billion kwh rate.
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bar chart illustrates how
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electricity
was produced
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utilised
by ten
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countries
in 2014. The units
are measured
in billions.

As an
overall
trend, it is evident that, maximum amount of
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electricity
was produced
as well
as consumed in the
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country
China, whereas minimum production and
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consumption
is
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seen
in
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korea
.
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, Germany was the
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only
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country
with higher
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utilisation
value than production value.

To commence with, China remained a popular city in producing adequate
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electricity
with 5398
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billion
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kwh
and almost equal
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consumption
rate.
However
, the United States was the second largest
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country
which generated 4094and
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utilised
3866
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billion
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kwh
in 2014.
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Countries
like Russia, Korea, France and Brazil consumed as much
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electricity
as they produced.

Adapting
further
, there was 50. 5
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billion
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kwh
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electricity
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consumption
observed in Germany
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526. 6
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kwh
was produced
in the
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given
period.
Interestingly
, India was the
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only
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country
which had the massive difference between the production and
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rate with 871 and 678. 8
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kwh
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IELTS academic The given bar chart illustrates how electricity was produced and utilised by ten countries in 2014. The units are measured in billions.

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