Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart below shows the number of passengers who used public transport in somewhere town from 2012 to 2015. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .

The chart below shows the number of passengers who used public transport in somewhere town from 2012 to 2015. d522d
The chart indicates the number of people in thousand who used Trams, buses, and trains For the transportation in 4 yes of time period 2012 to 2015. Overall, the number of people who travelled by trains were decreased but remained popular again. Where unpopular in the beginning although became most popular transportation type over people. Bus lovers were fluctuating during the time. In 2012, travel through trains were the most popular transportation method. More than 75000 people used trains in 2012. even though this has declined sharply in 2013 to around 20000. However in the next two years, trains became popular as before. Buses followed similar pattern which has fluctuated during years and recovered to the initial popularity of above 50000 passengers in 2015. On the other hand, the number of passengers travelling by traims were increased rapidly from around 23000 to more than 75000 in the 4 years of time period and became the most popular transportation of all time
The chart indicates the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in
Use "a thousand" or use a number before 'thousand'.
thousand
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
Trams, buses, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trains
For the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transportation
in 4
Possible agreement error. The noun 'yes' seems to be countable, so consider using: "yeses", "yesses".
yes
of time period 2012 to 2015.

Overall
, the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who travelled by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trains
were decreased
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
remained
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
popular
again. Where unpopular in the beginning although became most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transportation
type over
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. Bus lovers were fluctuating during the time.

In 2012, travel through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trains
were the most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transportation
method. More than 75000
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trains
in 2012.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
even
though this has declined
sharply
in 2013 to around 20000.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
in the
next
two years,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trains
became
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
popular
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
. Buses followed similar pattern which has fluctuated during years and recovered to the initial popularity of above 50000 passengers in 2015.

On the other hand
, the number of passengers travelling by
Possible spelling mistake found.
traims
were increased
rapidly
from around 23000 to more than 75000 in the 4 years of time period and became the most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transportation
of all time
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of passengers who used public transport in somewhere town from 2012 to 2015.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    The proportion of water use
    The pie charts below illustrate the proportion of total water consumption by various factors from 1997 to 2007. Overall, the amount of water used for food industry accounted for the biggest, the building industry made up the least of total water usage during the period of 10 years from 1997 to 2007....
  • 6band
    The chart demonstrates action about applying to produce blocks.
    First digger put clay to metal grid caved from special ground to make brick, second roller mix sand with water, third clay mixture hand to mould, next stage bricks put into drying room, next stage bricks was kiln with high, moderate and cool temperature till all goods was strong, next stage bricks w...
  • 6band
    The map illustrates the gradual increase in numbers of the residence of Chorleywood as well as the growth of the resources in the countryside.
    The map illustrates the gradual increase in numbers of the residence of Chorleywood as well as the growth of the resources in the countryside. Overall, it is clearly evident that suburb was well connected by the highway from three different side and from a train station from the fourth side in 1970...
  • 6band
    Compare household expenditures in Japan an Malaysia
    The pie charts reveal average household expenses in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. According to these proportions, household expenses in these two countries were analyzed based on five categories of Housing, Transport, Food, Healthcare and other goods and services. In Japan the largest scale ...
  • 6band
    The bar graph describes the time spent by children with mom, dad and both parents on weekdays and weekends per day.
    The bar graph demonstrate that how much time was utilized by juveniles with their parents during weekdays and weekends each day. Overall, it can be observed that children spent more time with parents on weekends. Additionally, during other days they enjoy significant amount of time with their mothe...
  • 6band
    write a report with at least 150 words
    The bar chart provides information about the various types of sports that males and females commonly played in New Zealand. Overall, it can be seen that girls mostly played netball and swim, while soccer and other kinds of sports were popular among boys in 2002. With regards to sports that were pre...





Get more results for topic:
  • The chart below shows the number of passengers who used public transport in somewhere town from 2012 to 2015. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .