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Tejaswi is a good girl and intelligent in her studies.

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The pie chart depicts the information regarding manufacture of passenger cars in the year 2015. overall, Greater China produced massive amount of cars and ranked first in the production. In contrast, Middle East was scored least in releasing of cars. Firstly, Greater china ranks first in production of cars in 2015, with a prop portion of 26%. Europe was the second most country with 25% of cars production. Europe followed by North America comes as a percentage of 19. Moreover, japan and korea was recorded a precentage of 16. Whereas, South Asia and South America productions were followed by 8% and 4% respectively. However, Middile East or Afirca are the least ranked in the production of cars as a proportion of 2%.
The pie chart depicts the information regarding manufacture of

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cars
in the year 2015.

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overall
, Greater China produced massive amount of
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cars
and ranked
first
in the

production.
In contrast
, Middle East
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least in releasing of cars.

Firstly
, Greater china ranks
first
in production of
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cars
in 2015, with a prop

portion of 26%. Europe was the second most country with 25% of
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cars
production.

Europe followed by North America
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as a percentage of 19.

Moreover
, japan and
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korea
was recorded
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precentage
of 16. Whereas, South Asia and South America

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productions
were followed
by 8% and 4%
respectively
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