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THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS HOW ELECTRICITY IS GENERATED IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION

THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS HOW ELECTRICITY IS GENERATED IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION 6lBVB
HERE WE ARE TALKING ABOUT HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION. THERE IS A ONE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOES HOW ELECTRICITY IS GENERATED IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION. THIS IS A DIFFICULT PROCESS BUT HOW THAT WILL MAKE ELECTRICITY WE ARE SEEN IN NEXT PARAGRAPGH. . HERE IS SUCH AS A NICE PROCESS WE CAN SEE. FIRST OF ALL WATER OF RIVER ARE HIGH-LEVEL OF RESERVOIR IN A DAM WHO MADE IT OUR COUNTRIES GOVERNMENTS. THOSE DAM IS TOO USEFULL FOR OUR FARMERS. IN A SUMMER WEATHER. BECAUSE IN A SUMMER OUR FARMERS ARE NOT SERVIVE WITHOUT WATER AND THERE PLATS ALSO NOT SERVIVE SO DAM IS PRIORITY NEED. NEXT PROCESS IS THE IN A DAY FLOW OF WATER TO GENERATE ELECTRICITY AND IN A NIGHT FLOW OF WATER DURING PUMPING. . THEN AFTER WATER IS FORCING TO IN A GENERATER. LIKE, IN DAY BASIS THERE WAS A TURBINES ARE THERE AND BY WATER FORCING THAT TURBINES ARE MOVING RAPIDLY AND THAT GENERATER WILL ROTATE. GENERATE THE HUGE AMOUNT OF ELECTRICITY. AND THEN WEST WATER IS RESERVOIR IN A NEXT TO THE WATER DEPARTURE. LIKE I WOULD LIKE TO ADD ONE THINK HERE IS THAT THE REVERSIBLE TURBINES ARE OPERATE IN DAY AND IN A NIGHT TIME PUMP WATER INTO HIGH-LEVEL RESERVOIR IN MY CONCLUSION IS THAT THE HYDROELECTRICITY GENERATE PROCESS IS TOUGH BUT NOT HARD TO GET UNDERSTOOD. .
HERE WE ARE TALKING ABOUT HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION. THERE IS A ONE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOES HOW
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ELECTRICITY
IS GENERATED
IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION. THIS IS A DIFFICULT
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PROCESS
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BUT
HOW THAT WILL
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MAKE
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ELECTRICITY
WE ARE
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SEEN
IN
NEXT
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PARAGRAPGH
.
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HERE IS SUCH AS A NICE
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PROCESS
WE CAN
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FIRST OF ALL
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WATER
OF RIVER ARE HIGH-LEVEL OF RESERVOIR IN A DAM WHO MADE IT OUR COUNTRIES
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GOVERNMENTS
. THOSE DAM IS TOO
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USEFULL
FOR OUR FARMERS. IN A SUMMER WEATHER.
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IN A SUMMER OUR FARMERS ARE NOT
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SERVIVE
WITHOUT
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WATER
AND THERE PLATS
ALSO
NOT
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SERVIVE
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DAM IS PRIORITY NEED.
NEXT
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IS THE IN A DAY FLOW OF
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WATER
TO GENERATE
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ELECTRICITY
AND IN A NIGHT FLOW OF
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WATER
DURING PUMPING.
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THEN AFTER
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IS FORCING TO IN A
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GENERATER
. LIKE, IN DAY BASIS
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ARE THERE AND BY
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FORCING THAT TURBINES ARE MOVING
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GENERATER
WILL ROTATE. GENERATE THE HUGE AMOUNT OF
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ELECTRICITY
. AND THEN WEST
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IS RESERVOIR IN A
NEXT
TO THE
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DEPARTURE. LIKE I WOULD LIKE TO
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ONE
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HERE IS THAT THE REVERSIBLE TURBINES ARE
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OPERATE
IN DAY AND IN A NIGHT TIME PUMP
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WATER
INTO HIGH-LEVEL RESERVOIR

IN MY CONCLUSION IS THAT THE HYDROELECTRICITY GENERATE
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IELTS academic THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS HOW ELECTRICITY IS GENERATED IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION

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