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The given bar chart describes the monthly expenditure in dollars of a household in the USA on food, gas and clothing in the first four months of 2010.

The given bar chart describes the monthly expenditure in dollars of a household in the USA on food, gas and clothing in the first four months of 2010. 1kyKy

The given bar chart describes the monthly expenditure in dollars of a household in the USA on food, gas and clothing in the first four months of 2010. Overall, it can be clearly seen from the bar chart that most of the domestic spending on average was in March. Besides, the total expenditure on clothing during the period was the highest. At the beginning, in January, the most money was used for food, at nearly 500$. Although expenditure on food went up slightly in the next month, it then experienced a noticeable decline and became the lowest spending of all the products at the end of the period at just over 300$. In the first two months of 2010, people spent less money for gas, at just over 300$ and 200$ respectively. However, in March, the expenditure on gas climbed gently at over 350$ and then rose wildly at the end of the period. In terms of clothing, in January, family members used approximately 200$ for clothing but one month later, this spending increased dramatically to under 600$. Although there was a significant decrease of nearly 250 $ in clothing expenditure, it then was dominant with approximately 700$ at the last month.

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given
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describes
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expenditure
 in dollars of a household in the USA on food, gas and clothing in the first
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months
 of 2010.

Overall
, it can be clearly
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seen
 from the bar chart that most of the domestic spending on average was in March. Besides
, the total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
 on clothing during the period was the highest.

At the beginning, in January, the most money was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for food, at nearly
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$500".$500
500$
. Although You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
 on food went up slightly
 in the next
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month
, it then experienced a noticeable decline and became the lowest spending of all the products at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$300".$300
300$
.

In the first
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months
 of 2010, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 spent less money for gas, at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$300".$300
300$
 and The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$200".$200
200$
respectively
. However
, in March, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
 on gas climbed gently
 at over The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$350".$350
350$
 and then rose wildly
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period.

In terms of clothing, in January, family members This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 approximately The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$200".$200
200$
 for clothing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 later, this spending increased dramatically
 to under The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$600".$600
600$
. Although there was a significant decrease of nearly
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$250".$250
250 $
 in clothing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
, it then was dominant with approximately The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$700".$700
700$
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month
. 