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The bar chart illustrates the amount that consumers spent on six different goods ( personal stereos, tennis racquets, perturmes, CDs, toys and photographic film) in given countries. Overall, Britain had the highest figure in all six products and surpassed other countries while Germany was by far lower than others. In addition, the amount of goods that people spent on in Britain hold the first position, especially, photographic film took the lead at more than 170 thousand pounds which was 10 higher than France. Besides, France took the second position at the amount spent on CDs, toys and photographic film with the range from 157 to 165 thousand pounds sterling. Not far behind, Italy also had the same figure that people spent on toys in France, at 157 thousand pounds, while perfumes, tennis racquets, and personal stereos was by far lower at 143, 142 and 145 respectively. Germany was the country that had the lowest figure spending overall at the range from 142 to 145 thousand pounds in all six products.

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