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The given bar chart depicts information regarding the IT industry and service industry as a percentage of the total GDP of the UK from 1992 to 2000.

The given bar chart depicts information regarding the IT industry and service industry as a percentage of the total GDP of the UK from 1992 to 2000. wnNQr
The bar chart below illustrates the percentage of GDP from the IT industry and service industry in the UK between 1992 to 2000. Overall, the percentage of the IT industry increased dramatically, from about 6, 2 percent to over 16 percent, higher than that of the service industry, from 4 to 8 percent. At the beginning of the period, the IT and the service industry started at 6 and 4 percent, respectively. After 2 years, both the percentage of IT and the percentage of the service industry increased slightly to around 8 and 6 percent. In 1996, there was a soft raise in the percentage of the service industry to about 7 percent, while the percentage of the IT industry dipped to under 8 percent. From 1996 to 2000, the percentage of the IT industry increased significantly from about 8 percent to nearly 15 percent, while that of the service industry only slightly grew by about 1 percent during the same period. Over 8 years, started in 1992 and ended in 2000, the percentage of the IT industry was always higher than the percentage of the service industry.
The bar chart below illustrates the
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of GDP from the IT
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and
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in the UK
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between 1992 to 2000
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Overall
, the
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percentage
of the IT
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industry
increased
dramatically
, from about 6, 2
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to over 16
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percent
, higher than that of the
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service
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industry
, from 4 to 8 percent.

At the beginning of the period, the IT and the
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service
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industry
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started
at 6 and 4
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percent
,
respectively
. After 2 years, both the
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percentage
of IT and the
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of the
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service
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increased
slightly
to around 8 and 6
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percent
. In 1996, there was a soft raise in the
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percentage
of the
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service
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industry
to about 7
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percent
, while the
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of the IT
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dipped to under 8
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. From 1996 to 2000, the
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of the IT
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increased
significantly
from about 8
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to
nearly
15
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, while that of the
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service
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only
slightly
grew by about 1
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during the same period. Over 8 years,
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started
in 1992 and ended in 2000, the
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of the IT
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was always higher than the
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of the
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.
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IELTS academic The given bar chart depicts information regarding the IT industry and service industry as a percentage of the total GDP of the UK from 1992 to 2000.

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