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The given bar chart and table compares how much time spent on the entertainment and home activities for male and female in UK.

The given bar chart and table compares how much time spent on the entertainment and home activities for male and female in UK. NNMj

The given bar chart and table compares how much time spent on the entertainment and home activities for male and female in UK. Overall, the table depicts the most time spent on the entertainment activities for both men and woman were recorded the highest numbers on watching TV and video and listing to radio, in compared to tow others activities (reading and sport). AS well as the bar chart provides information about that the women spent more time on the cooking and washing rather than men. On the leisure time side, both gender spent almost similar on the all three given activities, with TV, video and radio being the most popular with 137 and 118 minutes per day for men and women while, sports taking away the least of leisure time with 15 and 11 minutes per day for men and woman. Mean while, the household activities female spent more time on cooking and washing around 77 minutes per day, if we compares to male, they spent about 30 minutes per day, followed by woman is likely to do shopping with nearly 35 minutes more that male with 25 minutes per day, in addition to, washing clothes and ironing were spent more time by woman which, take about 30 minutes, while male spent 10 minutes on that. the least time for both gender spent on repairs about 19 and 10 minutes for male and woman.

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 bar chart and table compares how much You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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