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Two pie charts below show income employment pattern in Great Britain in 1992

Two pie charts below show income employment pattern in Great Britain in 1992 bnDP

The pie chart compares 6 main categories of female and male employment situation in the UK in the year 1992. It is clear to notices that there is big difference in clerical or related category which have more female workers than males, while craft related, and managerial and professional industry hires more male workers instead. Also, general labourers have the least employment rate for both genders. In 1992, 31% of women choose to work in the clerical or related area, which was the highest working type for women, while the equivalent figure for men was only 6%. By contrast, 24% of male worker was employed by craft industry which was the third largest employment trend in male gender, but the second to last for female worker. Managerial and professional area accounted for the highest proportion of male employment in 1992, and also the second highest percentage in female as well. In both general labourers and other non-manual or manual industry have the similar employment rate for both gender workers.

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