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The table provide inforThe table provides information about the number of people (in million) who travel to overseas in five countries (Africa, America, Asia and the pacific Europe and Middle east )in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005mation about the percentage of grades for students who gave “very good” rating in the first year of college for three courses ( economics, law and commerce). X5D8

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