Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Dattu maps below so rude access to a city Hospital in 2007 and in 2010

Dattu maps below so rude access to a city Hospital in 2007 and in 2010 2V6X
The two maps represent, how road access to a city hospital change over the period 2007 to 2010. Overall, it is seen clearly from both charts, the new transport facilities were added, such as the bus station and roundabout. Looking at city hospitals 2007 map in more detail, there was one city hospital, which covered by a ring road. That ring road was connected to city Road by the hospital Road. And both side of the hospital Road located at small bus stops. Besides that, there was a car park area. Turning to the 2010 map, it is evident that there were two roundabouts, which were joint ring road to hospital Road and hospital Road to city Road. But, the car park area was separated into two areas: one was for a staffed park, which was located north side of the city Road. The second was for the public car park, which was on the east side of the city hospital.
The two maps represent, how
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
access to a city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
over the period 2007 to 2010.

Overall
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
clearly
from both charts, the new transport facilities were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
, such as the bus station and roundabout.

Looking at city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospitals
2007 map in more detail, there was one city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
, which covered by a ring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
. That ring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
was connected
to city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Road
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Road
. And both side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Road
located at
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
bus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stops
.
Besides
that, there was a car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
area.

Turning to the 2010 map, it is evident that there were two roundabouts, which were joint ring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Road
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Road
to city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Road
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, the car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
area
was separated
into two areas: one was for a staffed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
, which
was located
north side of the city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Road
. The second was for the public car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
, which was on the east side of the city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Dattu maps below so rude access to a city Hospital in 2007 and in 2010

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts