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The table provide information about the percentage of grades for students who gave “very good” rating in the first year of college for three courses ( economics, law and commerce).

The table provide information about the percentage of grades for students who gave “very good” rating in the first year of college for three courses ( economics, law and commerce). 6Alx
The table provide information about the percentage of grades for students who gave “very good” rating in the first year of college for three courses ( economics, law and commerce). Overall, the commerce course was recorded the highest grades more than the other two courses in all given sources. when it comes to pre- course information, teaching and tutor satisfaction, approximately equal percentage range from 93% to 95% for commerce course, while the print and other resources with 86% and 81%. On other the side, economics courses showing from 90% to 95% for tutor, teaching and the pre-course information. Other resources was equal percentage nearly 60 % of satisfaction, but the printer resources was 81%. In addition to the law course, it is recorded from 62% to 76% for pre- course information, teaching, tutor and print resources. As well as, the other resources it 80% of satisfaction of law course.
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resources with 86% and 81%.

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IELTS academic The table provide information about the percentage of grades for students who gave “very good” rating in the first year of college for three courses ( economics, law and commerce).

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