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the gender of teachers in six different types of education setting in UK in 2020.

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This bar chart shows the gender of teachers in six different types of education setting in UK in 2020. In three of the six different types, women have higher percentage of men, women teachers made up a particularly large proportion of the teachers group in types related to pre-school, primary school and secondary school. The gender gap was particularly large in the pre-school and primary school. where the were 80% percent more than men. Men and women were equal represented in types related to collage. They were exactly the same. This type was the last one witch is indicated to have the equality result. In 2 next types the percent of men was higher then women specially in university. Overall, the chart shows that women had better relationship with children. it's probably because of maternal instinct. howrver men have significant role in pre-school and primary school.
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IELTS academic the gender of teachers in six different types of education setting in UK in 2020.

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