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Von Hippel-Lindau (VHL) is an autosomal dominant, neoplas

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Von Hippel-Lindau (VHL) is an autosomal dominant, neoplastic syndrome. It is caused by genetic aberration of the tumor suppressor gene VHL. It is characterized by multi-organ neoplastic lesions such as hemangioblastoma in CNS, renal cell carcinoma (RCC), and neuroendocrine tumors. By the age of 60, up to 70 % of patients develop RCC [1]. The most common sites for RCC metastasis are the lung, lymph nodes, bones, and liver. However testicular metastasis from RCC is rare and bilateral testicular metastasis is extremely rare [2, 3]. In this article, we present a VHL case with synchronous bilateral testicular metastasis from RCC.
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Hippel-Lindau
(VHL) is an autosomal dominant, neoplastic syndrome. It
is caused
by genetic aberration of the tumor suppressor gene VHL. It
is characterized
by multi-organ neoplastic lesions such as
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hemangioblastoma
in CNS, renal cell carcinoma (RCC), and neuroendocrine tumors. By the age of 60, up to 70 % of patients develop RCC [1]. The most common sites for RCC
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metastasis
are the lung, lymph nodes, bones, and liver.
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However
testicular
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from RCC is rare and bilateral testicular
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metastasis
is
extremely
rare [2, 3]. In this article, we present a VHL case with synchronous bilateral testicular
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metastasis
from RCC.

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