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The bar chart illustrates how much electricity produced and used by 10 nations during 2014.

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The bar chart illustrates how much electricity produced and used by 10 nations during 2014. Overall, it can be seen that the amount of production of electricity was more than its consumption in all countries except in Germany. Focusing on the production of electricity, the most and the least levels of production belonged to China and Korea, at 5395, and 4851 kWh, respectively. The amount of generated power is similarly almost 500 kWh in Germany, Brazil, and France. The second biggest country in production of the power is the US at4099 kWh, and other countries are in lower situations than the United States, at less than 1500 kWh. As for the consumption of the electricity, largest amount of usage was for China, at 5322 kWh, whereas the lowest figure belonged to Korea, which is 449. 5. The United States was the second biggest energy consumer, at 3666 kWh, and Germany has a different amount of usage among other countries, with582 kWh.

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