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bar chart ielts task 1 about the export earnings in years 2015 and 2016

bar chart ielts task 1 about the export earnings in years 2015 and 2016 PM3VB
The bar chart compares export earnings of 5 different categories (petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, argiculutral products and textiles) between the years 2015 and 2016 in a specific country. Units are measured in billions of dolars. Overall, All categories' exports increased in 2016 except for gems and jewelery. Textiles exports experinced the greatest rise. However, Argiculutral products have the lowest increasement. Textiles exports earnings was about $25 billion in 2015, but in 2016 it reached over $30 billion, that's approximately %15 increase. In the same pattern, engineered goods increased by %8. 5 which is about $4 billion. Moreover, petroluem products also increased, but by only 3%. On the other hand, argicultural exports earnings almost haven't changed. While gems and jewellery export earnings actually decreased from about $43 billion to only about $41 billion, about 5% decrease rate.
The bar chart compares
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export
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earnings
of 5
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different
categories (petroleum
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products
, engineered
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goods
, gems and
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jewellery
,
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argiculutral
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products
and textiles) between the years 2015 and 2016 in a specific country. Units
are measured
in
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billions
of
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dolars
.

Overall
, All categories'
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exports
increased in 2016
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except for
gems and
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jewelery
. Textiles
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exports
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experinced
the greatest rise.
However
,
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Argiculutral
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products
have the lowest
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increasement
.

Textiles
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exports
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earnings
was about $25
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billion
in 2015,
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but
in 2016 it reached over $30
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billion
, that's approximately %15 increase. In the same pattern, engineered
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goods
increased by %8. 5 which is about $4
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billion
.
Moreover
,
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petroluem
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products
also
increased,
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but
by
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only
3%.

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,
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argicultural
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exports
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earnings
almost haven't
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changed
. While gems and
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jewellery
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export
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earnings
actually decreased from about $43
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billion
to
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only
about $41
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billion
, about 5% decrease rate.
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IELTS academic bar chart ielts task 1 about the export earnings in years 2015 and 2016

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