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Line graph of fast food and sit-down restaurant meals consumed in Australia.

Line graph of fast food and sit-down restaurant meals consumed in Australia. WEWYD
The given line graph illustrates that Australian families consumed fast food and restaurants meal during 1970 to 2010. Overall, it can be seen that the fast food had the highest consumed in Australia for majority of the time frame. Also, sit-down meals fluctuated till 2010. In detail, at begin time fast-food and sit down restaurants were famous equal. In fast food and sit-down restaurants, nearly 20 meals were eaten by Australian families in 1970. In 1980, both numbers of the meal were increased by 15 meals in sit down restaurants amd by almost 10 meals in fast food and sit down meals reached at 35 meals while fast food meals were touched 30 meals. By contrast, in 1990, consumption of sit down meal increased only 8 meals nearly and reached 43 meals. A number of meals had stable till the next decade. After 2000, the number of meals were increased and touched 60 meals in 2010. In addition, fast food meals were increased through out three decades. Meals were increased by 20 till 2010. At the end of the year consumption of fast food meals were almost 118 in Australia.
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line graph illustrates that Australian families consumed
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and
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restaurants
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meal
during 1970 to 2010.

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, it can be
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seen
that the
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had the highest consumed in Australia for
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majority of
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, sit-down
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fluctuated till 2010.

In detail, at
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time
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-food and
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were
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equal. In
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and sit-down
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,
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20
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were eaten
by Australian families in 1970.
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were
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in
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by almost 10
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and
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reached at 35
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while
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were touched
30
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. By contrast, in 1990, consumption of
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8
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nearly
and reached 43
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. A number of
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had stable till the
next
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were
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increased
and touched 60
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meals
in 2010.

In addition
,
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were
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three decades.
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by 20 till 2010. At the
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of the year consumption of
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were almost 118 in Australia.
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IELTS academic Line graph of fast food and sit-down restaurant meals consumed in Australia.

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