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The following line graph shows the percentage of two modes of traveling in Vancouver from 1990 to 2015.

The following line graph shows the percentage of two modes of traveling in Vancouver from 1990 to 2015. xDJ9Q

The line graph compares the percentage of using two different means of transportation in Vancouver between 1990 and 2015. Overall, the percentage of traveling by car had a dramatic increase while the figure for commuting by bus significantly declined over the period. Based on the statistics, traveling by car stood at roughly 25% in 1990, whereas almost 65% of Vancouver’s population considered commuting by bus. Over the next ten years, these numbers had drastic changes and ultimately met in the year 2000, when the trend for taking the bus went down gradually to approximately 45%. In contrast, the figure for traveling by car witnessed a significant growth to the same amount as the other trend simultaneously. To draw a comparison, the figure for traveling by car had a steady rise to reach the highest point with 80% in 2015. In contrast, the percentage of people who took a bus noticeably dropped to nearly 30% at the end of the given period.

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