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The following graph indicates the yield for several crops and type of fertilizers.

The following graph indicates the yield for several crops and type of fertilizers. 0AmQ1
The above chart summarizes crop output for a number of different types of vegetables, and it contrasts the impacts of organic and non-organic fertilizer on production. Crop output varied overall from 1 bushel (in the case of non-organically fertilized tomatoes and lettuce) to 5. 5 bushels (in the case of organically fertilized green peppers). Overall, it appears that organic fertilizer significantly outperformed regular fertilizer for some crops, while it marginally outperformed or was equal in performance to regular fertilizer for others. In the case of tomatoes, green pepper, and cucumber, the organic yield was more than doubled that of the non-organic equivalent. In the case of spinach and lettuce, the organic output was slightly higher, whereas there was no difference in the output of organic versus non-organic kale. Overall, data suggest that organic fertilizer may produce superior results for some or all vegetables, particularly in the case of fruiting plants versus salad greens.
The above chart summarizes crop
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output
for a number of
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different
types of vegetables, and it contrasts the impacts of
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organic
and non-organic
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fertilizer
on production.

Crop
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output
varied
overall
from 1 bushel (in the case of non-
organically
fertilized tomatoes and lettuce) to 5. 5 bushels (in the case of
organically
fertilized green peppers).
Overall
, it appears that
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organic
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fertilizer
significantly
outperformed regular
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fertilizer
for
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some
crops, while it
marginally
outperformed or was equal in performance to regular
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fertilizer
for others. In the case of tomatoes, green pepper, and cucumber, the
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organic
yield was more than doubled that of the non-organic equivalent. In the case of spinach and lettuce, the
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organic
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output
was
slightly
higher, whereas there was no difference in the
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output
of
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organic
versus non-organic kale.

Overall
, data suggest that
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organic
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fertilizer
may produce superior results for
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some
or all vegetables,
particularly
in the case of fruiting plants versus salad greens.
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