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The following diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

The following diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. gwoD
The given diagram depicts the various processes involved in obtaining clean drinking water from rainwater. Overall, it can be seen that the process has five main stages which starts with the collection of impure water from homes and ends with the distribution of purified water to the same homes. The process starts with the collecting of rainwater from rooftops using drains. All households in the locality are fitted with such drains. The water thus collected from all homes is then made to pass through the water filter. The filter removes most of the impurities. The filtered water is then collected in a large storage tank. The water in the storage tank is then directed to the water treatment tank via a pipe. In the water treatment tank, the filtered water is treated with chemicals to make it fit for drinking. The potable water is then sent to households via pipelines and is made available for domestic use.
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diagram depicts the various processes involved in obtaining clean drinking
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water
from rainwater.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the process has five main stages which
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starts
with the collection of impure
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water
from homes and ends with the distribution of purified
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water
to the same homes. The process
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starts
with the collecting of rainwater from rooftops using drains. All households in the locality
are fitted
with such drains. The
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water
thus
collected from all homes is then made to pass through the
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water
filter. The filter removes most of the impurities.
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The
filtered
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water
is then collected in a large storage
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tank
.
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The
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water
in the storage
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tank
is then directed to the
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water
treatment
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tank
via a pipe. In the
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water
treatment
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tank
, the filtered
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water
is treated
with chemicals to
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make
it fit for drinking. The potable
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water
is then
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sent
to households via pipelines and
is made
available for domestic
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use
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IELTS academic The following diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

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